I wouldn't call myself an expert at the sales e-mail, but I keep it very brief as I reckon people have short attention spans. I basically say here's the domain I have for sale, please feel free to e-mail me your offer, and here are the reasons why you might like to own it (I link to the page to keep the e-mail brief):
http://www.keyphrasedomains.co.uk/benefits-of-a-generic-domain.php
Rgds
Personally, I would stay away from this route. To much like spam.
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