Wanted: Website Review 3g Phone - rip it to bits!

[dashu1]

After getting my site to about 8th in G for the main search term but making no sales I decided to try the e2save whitelabel solution, which involved redirecting the site to theirs and made sure that my site promptly disappeared from Google altogether.

As a result I've put up a wordpress concoction at 3g phone to try & get it back into G and to hopefully do a better job of converting some sales.

Would you mind please giving me the full force of your opinion as to whats wrong with it and what would improve it.

Thanks!

 

[davedevelopment]

Where did you get the images of the phones from? I think they could do with being a bit crisper.

 

[dashu1]

Hello,
they're just pulled from the retailers.

 

[retired_member13]

I'm getting a site down error.

 

[dashu1]

Really? It seems to be working for me.

 

[acceleratoraccelerator is verified member.]

I have a few mobile phone sites, the main ones getting half decent traffic being New Mobile Phone and Free Mobile Phones. However, I know there are a lot of changes I need to make, as I don't make many sales from them.

I think the main reasons for this are:

I am not providing enough advice to the visitor about which phone is better.

I am not displaying the best deals / tariffs available on each phone.

I don't have any top 10s of handsets and deals.

I don't (yet) have any reviews available, although I have started a reviews site now.

Your site is reasonable, but I feel if you started giving more advice and deal comparison, that's how you will see the conversion rate improve.

The only page that I have made sales off is this pink Samsung Blade page, which shows the benefit of niche focus, but if I actually did deal comparison there would be further sales.

All images on your site should be clickable, some aren't.

Hope that helps.

Rgds