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Discussion in 'Website Reviews' started by paymatters, May 12, 2015.

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  1. paymatters United Kingdom

    paymatters Active Member

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    Just about to go live with new brand.

    Any improvement ideas would be greatly received.

    (Mobile version and livechat not yet running)
     
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    I think the site looks great. It has a good colour scheme and is nicely laid out.

    You could perhaps be pitching the product slightly better, by using bullet points giving the benefits. I recommend use of the tick symbol for bullet points.

    On the About page you've put:

    (Don’t let the rainy names fool you, we’re not dull accountants)

    I know you're using humour, but I'm not sure whether a reference to dull accountants sets the right tone.

    Good luck.
     
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