Mini site for new Jack Black Movie "Be Kind Rewind" constructive criticism wanted

[WaftyCrank]

Howdy peeps.
I managed to buy the domain www.bekindrewind.co.uk as it's a new movie starring Jack Black, Mos Def and Danny Glover (releasing this year).

I've created (not finished) a mini site for the movie and was looking for constructive criticism on it. Ideally around maximising click through for profit (any suggestions?), things you'd like to see in the site etc. What's good, what's not good (expecting more of the latter if I'm honest).

I'm looking to get revenue from click through and amazon sales, but will sell at right price if appropriate.

Thanks in advance.

 

[WaftyCrank]

Come on someone must have some input? Or is it that good

 

[denchomsky]

The text about the film is unreadable on my macbook.

 

[WaftyCrank]

The text about the film is unreadable on my macbook.

Too small?

 

[jimbo1]

text looks ok on my imac - you could add more adsense if you wanted - your are allowed 3 slots, don't know if you want to?

what about resources page - looks like a broken link.

 

[denchomsky]

text looks ok on my imac - you could add more adsense if you wanted - your are allowed 3 slots, don't know if you want to?

what about resources page - looks like a broken link.

Your font size is set to 60%, it may look ok on a large monitor but on a laptop it is to small as it it resizing according to screen resolution

You have 44 validation errors in the html and 1 in the css, you are mostly using tables for layout which isn't good practice these days.

I wouldn't put anymore ad's on the home page, I would also put the content first then the amazon ad underneath, content is King!

 

[WaftyCrank]

Unfortunately my CSS and HTML experience are limited (as you can probably tell).
I use Front Page if I have to do my own designing and CSS is still a mystery to me.

Yes the Resources page is a broken link right now as I am putting that link together.
So you think the Amazon link would look better after the initial content?

I've also altered the font size too.

 

[DarrenDarren is verified member.]

Visit the following link to review and correct your errors.

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=h...(detect+automatically)&doctype=Inline&group=0

Other than its not bad, Are you receiving any hits on the Adsense?

 

[WaftyCrank]

Visit the following link to review and correct your errors.

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=h...(detect+automatically)&doctype=Inline&group=0

Other than its not bad, Are you receiving any hits on the Adsense?

Yes indeed
Floating around the 300 visitors per day. CTR being 8% - 12%

 

[Flindo]

I looked, it isn't there......

 

[WaftyCrank]

Gone now mate.
Admin feel free to close this thread.

 

[rjs_essex]

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