Wanted: Domain Appraisal Appraisal of my website please

[Rob Manchester]

Hi I am new here and `also new to the hole website thing please be `so good as to tell what you think of my website
thanks so much

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[julian]

not bad for a first attempt...

does the job: 6.5 out of 10

 

[Rob Manchester]

not bad for a first attempt...

does the job: 6.5 out of 10

Thanks

What would say icould do to maqke it better

 

[retired_member32]

i like it,it's clean and descriptive and much better than my first dozen websites,i was always told by an old pro(not prostitute)that the word "click here" is frowned upon when crawled,i would remove that and just link it to a normal relevant word in the sentence.

mark

 

[holgate]

Re the site, go get a free wordpress template, then spell check your content.

PS. Is this anything to do with selling pyramids...?

 

[mojoco]

Re the site, go get a free wordpress template, then spell check your content.

PS. Is this anything to do with selling pyramids...?

I think you nailed it!

 

[ratboy]

Looks just like all the other get rich (oh give me £5,000 first) schemes.

 

[Rob Manchester]

Re the site, go get a free wordpress template, then spell check your content.

PS. Is this anything to do with selling pyramids...?

Thanks i will do that

No its not selling pyramids

 

[EdwinEdwin is verified member.]

Why do you need advice when you already know how to make "all the money you will ever need"?

Seems a LOT of people have already gone out of their way to try and help you:-
http://www.ukbusinessforums.co.uk/forums/showthread.php?t=67750
http://www.a1businessforums.co.uk/f...ting-public-relations/3597-advice-please.html

And so on...

No evidence in any of the threads that you've actually followed the advice, though.

 

[TinkyWinky]

Edwin - LOL nice find you pre-empted my first task when reading this. What a muppet bet he thinks we're all effing stupid.

I think the best way to tell you is to show you my website


How convenient - make sure you get those links in the forum eh Rob.

 

[Rob Manchester]

I see no crime in asking for advice anywhere

 

[holgate]

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Place your ad in exchange and mart, business section, it's the international epicentre for business men wishing to share advice on helping poor stupid people to amass amazing wealth in a prompt and timely fashion.

PS. would this scheme in any way involve the transfer of assets from my kingdom into yours?

Sorry Rob

 

[Rob Manchester]

advice is all I am asking for

 

[Allie]

Well, I pm'd Rob this morning offering to point out errors in his text, and he responded by thanking me and asking me to let him know what these were. So, in this case at least, he seems prepared to take advice. I'll know when I next check his website.

Maybe his post is a marketing ploy, but it could also be a genuine cry for help, and I think he certainly needs it. Perhaps I'm not as shrewd as you guys, but I like to speak as I find until I have reason to do otherwise. I bought an excellent and well-respected web editor recently and the advertisements for it are very similar to Rob's. The hard sell doesn't always mean a bad product.

 

[Rob Manchester]

Well, I pm'd Rob this morning offering to point out errors in his text, and he responded by thanking me and asking me to let him know what these were. So, in this case at least, he seems prepared to take advice. I'll know when I next check his website.

Maybe his post is a marketing ploy, but it could also be a genuine cry for help, and I think he certainly needs it. Perhaps I'm not as shrewd as you guys, but I like to speak as I find until I have reason to do otherwise. I bought an excellent and well-respected web editor recently and the advertisements for it are very similar to Rob's. The hard sell doesn't always mean a bad product.

Thats very kind of you ill get back to your 2nd pm in a little bit

 

[Rob Manchester]

Thanks to all those who gave good advice here Im just geting back to show you all mynew changes and hope you like them AFM Wealth Mastery Program